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yay? by semehammer yay? by semehammer
I've been having a lot of trouble with her. Any suggestions?

Looks like I need to change the coat, thanks guys!
Also please don't post this anywhere, it's not the final product!
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:iconel-drago-800:
El-Drago-800 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
Someone help her! She's being attacked by birds!
"Coming this fall, Fluttershy stars in... Birdemic 3: The Birdening."
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Vitao-cartunista2012 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
very nice!
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:iconikari-ken:
ikari-ken Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Woah! It's really cute :D!
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:iconderaza360:
DeRaza360 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, I came here because some else favourited it. Good drawing.
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:iconimblue36752100:
imblue36752100 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
AWWWWWW.
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skechygrl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
But... if it's not the final product... and you don't want people to post it anywhere.... Why did YOU post it?

I think it looks grand.
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:iconsemehammer:
semehammer Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wanted some advice about how to improve it. And I put it in scraps so fewer people would see it.
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:iconskechygrl:
skechygrl Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah. I didn't notice it was in scraps. I dunno, dude, i think it's awesome as-is. But then, of course, you're a better artist than me, so I can't really help... ^^;
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s-word Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Yes!!!
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:iconinuloveouo:
inuloveOUO Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oww so cute!!
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:iconmarkvamp:
MarkVamp Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Loved it ^^
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:iconmoonlight-the-pony:
Moonlight-The-Pony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student
It is so cute!
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:iconwesty543:
Westy543 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist
I loved the half-enthused "yay?" at the end of find a pet. This is great. :D
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kehwar Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
Maybe it's me and not the drawing, but it took me a few seconds to understand she is Fluttershy... i don't know
Also, i agree with the coat, i don't like the coat
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:iconthedemontamer:
TheDemonTamer Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Hahaha. Good one!
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:iconarzacksylpheed:
ArzackSylpheed Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Flutternest is the best
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:icongaarathedancingpanda:
ojsDGMNapsngmLHN SO CUTE!
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:icondancinninjac:
dancinninjac Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Haha! I love this! And they even made a nest in her hair! Awesome!
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:iconfsujs:
fsujs Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I might could offer advice if I knew what about her was troubling you.
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:iconsemehammer:
semehammer Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The outfit design. It looks like most people are saying the coat's the problem.
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:iconfsujs:
fsujs Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the coat is fine(I prefer it to the nearly ubiquitous sweater design), maybe change it's color to match the blue in her cutie mark, but other than that it's fine. The dress seems like it might be a bit short though.
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:iconzantyarz:
ZantyARZ Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) awesome
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:iconstarvampiress13:
StarVampiress13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That dress is adorable. :) And so are the birds in her hair. I think the sweater might be the problem - it looks a little bit frumpy. But still, cute.
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Ahm-Mahjick Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Her arms look a little wonky, mostly her left forearm. It looks sort of stubby next to her right one.

I know she's supposed to have a buttload of hair, but I think it may be piled a bit too tall (especially with the birdnest on top). Maybe if you shortened it down a bit, her face would look a little less elongated, and she'd seem less "top heavy".

I think the sweater is a cute idea, but it seems a bit too thick on her shoulders. With both the thickness there and the added shrug motion, it makes her neck look really small.

Also wondering, where is the source of light for your shading supposed to be? It seems like it's coming from below on her left side, and from above on her right. This doesn't really have much of an impact, but I feel like due in part to this it's sort of hard to tell how turned her body is away from us (which may explain the aforementioned difference in arm length).

Otherwise, I think it's looking pretty good. I know nothing about art, but I hope that helped!
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Dapplewhisker Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is adorable, I love your drawing style!
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:icondante8411:
Dante8411 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Chin's a bit pointed? Fingers are kind of long?
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:iconmikisakiiro:
Mikisakiiro Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks great to me! :D I actually drew Flutternest (HAHA I'M SO PUNNY I'm talking about the birds on her head) in a sketchdump a few days ago..
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SonicDash57 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm gonna fav this and hope there will be an update soon.

But I can say this: You're getting the hang of this! The previous art I've seen, you're awesome! Keep up the great work!
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AlbinoOtaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
So awesome!
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piplh Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice, I love how it's looking, she must have very nice shampoo if she's willing to let a bird nest in her hair. What about it are you having trouble with?
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:iconflutternostalgia:
Flutternostalgia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
a important suggestion.
try a least a fulldesign (head to shoes)
good luck.
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:iconharlequin-smiles:
Harlequin-Smiles Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
You are so amaziiiiinnggg. :D
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:iconwriggle-kick:
Wriggle-Kick Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HNNNNNG
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:iconblueeveningstar:
BlueEveningstar Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I do not like the green coat. Maybe if it was silky and see throughy?
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:iconphantombadger:
PhantomBadger Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Dem Eyes
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:iconmarikaefer:
marikaefer Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That pidgeon nomming her hair is best.
As for suggestions... maybe remove the coat. She has that huge hair and in combination with the coat it just looks so "heavy" all in all. I like the color though, maybe turn it into a light little green jacket?
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Manhunterj Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WARGHLJHG KRKRE REL!!! This is perfect!!
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:iconkagatsuki-budou:
Kagatsuki-Budou Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
lol
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:iconlordzid:
lordzid Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe looks awesome
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:iconxsinxzerox:
xsinxzerox Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Looks like a similar version of Pinkie Pie somewhere...
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:icontechnonarrator:
technonarrator Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Suggestion: Keep on rockin'
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:iconpurezooks:
PureZOOKS Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Hmm, in my opinion, I am not liking the big green coat she has, it doesn't seem particularly "Fluttershy".
The dress however, looks absolutely perfect for her.
If you don't like the look of her dress on the outside, then how about a coat of this design?[link]
Also, as a suggestion, how would she look with a floppy sun hat like this? [link]
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:iconninjagamer3:
ninjagamer3 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
:icononionloveplz: She's just too cute x3
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:iconmclarenmp4-27:
McLarenMP4-27 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
So cute! Thank you for not putting her in a sun dress like everyone else, haha.
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semehammer Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a sundress under the jacket T-T
It seems like everyone just puts in a sundress (to show her nature-loving side) or just in a sweater (to show her shy side) so I was like ehhhhh....both?
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ninjagamer3 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
How about a yellow top and green/pink shorts/skirt? I've seen a couple of those and they look nice on her :D I'm not asking for a complete redo of this picture with this idea. Just a suggestion for the future.
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:iconmastersaiyan:
MasterSaiyan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
:iconfluttershyshrugplz:
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:iconjewelclaus:
JewelClaus Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Everything about her is just so Fluttershy :iconwooowplz:
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:iconitsbeastly:
ItsBeastly Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
this is kool :)
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